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TING
我先好奇問問，如果我繼續看下去，會不會被劇透？感覺這裡已經是我看到的最新進度🤣

從這一章已經很明顯感覺到，賈絲琳在哈利眼中只是個約炮的對象，反而對蓋兒才是動了真感情，當你對一個人產生興趣，甚至無時無刻都在想著對方，很明顯就是戀上的徵兆，那句「今晚之前是這樣的」就是這樣而來，他不想讓蓋兒再對他有不好的印象，決定要跟過去的形象說再見😆
3 days agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
會也不會哈哈哈
第三篇會多了一些哈利的心理變化，還有他用其他配角的相處等等，盡量還原為什麼他會去到超商這樣，算是一個看正文不會清楚的部分哈哈哈
但我還沒寫完所以算卡在中途哈哈哈哈⌓̈

婷的想法跟我一樣！！但感覺戀愛都是毫無徵兆的，有時候她的身影就會卡在腦海 揮之不去XDDD哈利現在還沒意識到不對，後面就直接一頭栽進去了哈哈哈
2 days agoReply
TING
@Wendy，Dani，Brian,拜託，第一個想到的是蓋兒居然還沒意識到，果然要揍哈利一頓！揍他一頓，他就應該清醒過來了😝現在害我好奇，他之後是怎麼意識到🤔
1 day agoReply
Wendy，Dani，Brian
@TING,第三章其實就意識到了哈哈哈 原因也很簡單啦XDDD不過我還是很支持用一頓來讓他清醒，畢竟他很欠揍哈哈哈
15 hours agoReply
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