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妮絲
喔吼，青梅竹馬太子？他超愛。
只是在那樣的環境，江凝煙擁有兵權，就算太子這份情感不參雜利益成分，又會有誰相信呢？
9 months agoReply
雲兮玥
所以姜凝湮是他最不該愛上、最不能娶的人，他堵不住朝堂上所有人的嘴，罅隙也會在眾臣心中發酵。
9 months agoReply
原子能
這次的回憶透過玄琴之口講給召容聽，不僅再次深化了姜凝湮的「美強慘」形象（十六歲便身負重傷、九死一生），更重要的是，它在男主角心中建立起了師父的「神話」形象。頻繁使用回憶，可能會讓讀者感到疲勞，雖然兩次回憶的內容和作用都不同。
9 months agoReply
雲兮玥
回憶部分會再有一小段就沒了，這個用法會注意的，謝謝提醒❤️
9 months agoReply
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