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Vincent
利害利害👏👏👏曾經我也想試試寫差不多的東西😂😂😂寫不出來。

我以為只是氣氛用詞。原來是主題，動作，誇張的執念，氣氛。的組合拳⋯⋯👏👏👏

獲益良多。謝謝。
9 hours agoReply
舒桐
嗨～ @枯骨薔薇，書評已經寫好，希望對你有幫助！
17 hours agoReply
枯骨薔薇
多謝舒大你的無私奉獻，我真是獲益良多。 的而且確我是一個氛圍感官細節控，其餘考慮的因素，我真是忽略好多，我會再繼續努力加油～辛苦你了，謝謝！
16 hours agoReply
舒桐
@枯骨薔薇,不會～這部作品也同樣帶給我不少收穫與閱讀的樂趣，能對你有幫助就好！
9 hours agoReply
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