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kikii
謝謝你喜歡這個題目！雖然這說不上是評語啦，只能說是一點心得，但我覺得這樣的感情很有意思！看dynamic的話，小情侶很有拉扯感w

我看這個有點像是在看劇本（？，因為主要都是以對話為主的。唯一美中不足的一點就是我只能靠對話內容以及（）來區分說話的人，偶爾會有一點點混亂啦，但除此以外都很喜歡。
6 months agoReply
OI
應該比劇本還苛刻，劇本甚至有情景和動作提示......而且本來不想加括號區別Y先生和其他角色，還想說讀者通個靈演個雙簧什麼的都是基本技能吧。果然這樣太過分了，我要從今天開始戒掉謎語瞎子爺爺的爛習慣 (._.

啊順便問一下，你對這兩位角色的攻受怎麼看？
6 months agoReply
kikii
@OI, Y先生請當攻吧！（害羞捂臉）
6 months agoReply
OI
@kikii,Y先生喜歡這個回答 (⁰▿⁰)
6 months agoReply
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