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鎖夢籠
希拉：媽媽也帶我們走吧，我也可以當你的女兒(X)
6 months agoReply
楠都月
月螢：？？？養多一個女兒？？🥹
6 months agoReply
霽客
空氣裡只剩下夜風與我的心跳聲——冰冷又沉重。
6 months agoReply
楠都月
🥹🥹🥹🥹🤧
6 months agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
讀到這裡，不知道為甚麼，折腰突然發現，銀月媽咪出現的時機太過突兀了，她都發了瘋的找銀月，甚麼時候不好找，偏偏要在有時獸時找到她，這不是.....？？？


還有，這到底是怎麼回事？


把章節用這種方式做ending，不就是要讓人繼續追下去嗎？！銀月果然無恥。
6 months agoReply
楠都月
你想到了很好的方向呢。 為什麼剛好是這個時間點？ 
我很喜歡在章節尾停在充滿懸念的位置呢，這樣讀者才會很想快點看新一章😎😎😎
6 months agoReply
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