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哇你完全滿足了我寫BG以外類型的全部虛榮心，真的超級開心(((o(*ﾟ▽ﾟ*)o)))

我自己的路線比較詭異，這篇的目標是鍛鍊ToM，想試試剝離和加上一個顯然在胡言亂語的敘事者濾鏡會有什麼效果。當然不除掉濾鏡有不除掉的讀法，你的反應讓我確定基本沒抓錯方向，真的很感謝。

亞岱爾很像渣男是因為科提斯想要讀者這麼想，中年牢騷叔叔有他自己的苦衷啦......雖然有放一點點糖但科提斯視角似乎還是太難找了，應該之後換科提斯老婆當敘事者會比較好嗑(對科提斯有老婆，意外吧)

總之非常謝謝你的評論，也祝你一切順利，新年快樂！
5 months agoReply
小魚一尾
新年快樂～
原來是故意的嗎XD科提斯居然有老婆這是我沒想過的XD也謝謝參加
5 months agoReply
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