/comment.php?chapter=34&id=191116
Comments - 寰宇碰撞論 | Penana
arrow_back
Comments - 寰宇碰撞論
info_outline
format_color_text
toc
exposure_plus_1
Search stories, writers or societies
Show More Tags
Continue ReadingClear All
More
What Others Are ReadingRefresh
See more results for ""
X
Never miss what's happening on Penana!
Turn on notifications
Later
Login with Facebook or Sign up/Login to leave a comment.
大秦書說人
如果是按照修仙穿越者爽文的套路，等等朔平就是要極品靈根了
不過大俠的作品，在下不敢妄自揣測了，翻車太多次了
這個陣靈能看到朔平是穿越者的真相嗎
2 weeks agoReply
原子能
陣靈無法知道真相，不過是個好建議，能帶出更多張力。
2 weeks agoReply
鎖夢籠
父母都有靈根，妹妹只能當麻瓜了...
1 month agoReply
原子能
麻瓜……哈哈。
1 month agoReply
夏之楓
這一段寫得很動人，小孩子的反應最直接，也為後續可能出現的「逆襲」或「保護」情節鋪了路。
6 months agoReply
原子能
嗯嗯，初顯逆襲的曙光。
6 months agoReply
羅界
石廊會投射出讓客人感到安寧的環境，如果跟哈利波特的萬應室結合就更完美了。
7 months agoReply
原子能
萬應室，嗯，有空查查看。哈利波特。我沒看完。
7 months agoReply
我為九斗米折腰
具有靈根的父母，看來兩家人的祖上，可能有人修煉。🤔
7 months agoReply
原子能
這是很合理的推測。
7 months agoReply
Show more...
Back to Story
×
×
Write down what you like about the story
×
Reading Theme:

Font Size:

Line Spacing:

Paragraph Spacing:

Load the next issue automatically


Reset to default

X
×
x
Proceed

x
Before You Publish
Please ensure your story does not contain illegal, hateful, inciting, or violence-promoting content, or any infringing, plagiarized, or spam material, and that it complies with Penana’s Terms of Use.
Penana reserves the right to remove any content that violates these rules or causes legal or community risk, and to suspend or terminate related accounts.
arrow_back
×

Select a reason:

×

Install this webapp for easier offline reading: tap and then Add to home screen.