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語者
殺殺殺，十二道金牌啥時會來？
3 months agoReply
商澐
不要講出來啦🤣🤣🤣
3 months agoReply
羽璇
打得對方完全猝不及防呢~
可這樣盛大的軍功絕對會引起君王忌憚啦......
因為民眾只會說：女將軍威武，卻忘記皇上
未來可要吃苦頭囉！
最後回去後就卸下兵權，已表忠臣吧.......
雖然卸下後等於沒實權，但若皇上真的要殺也得顧忌下威望
除非利用林驍霆演一齣，爾後才能......
5 months agoReply
商澐
林驍霆：瓦達西？
5 months agoReply
剑寒舟
刺激刺激！ 我觉得情绪和情节可以再加描述，目前来看故事还算不错的，如果需要更多建议的时候随时再来问问 
1 year agoReply
商澐
還在改，嗚嗚嗚
1 year agoReply
剑寒舟
@商澐, 听到了 慢慢来 XD 我还是会继续支持的
1 year agoReply
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