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大秦書說人
帝國最高執法機關，納維特
看來聖運很強，不只是執法機關的人，而且頭腦清晰，還敢兩個人就衝上去執行正義
2 weeks agoReply
MMM
是的 故事想表達戰鬥必須仰賴戰術


2 weeks agoReply
老謝
第一章就是暗鴉會企圖屠殺 故事一開始就是很嚴峻的情況呢
2 weeks agoReply
MMM
是的 想先用戰鬥 順便介紹魔法戰鬥系統
2 weeks agoReply
雪燼
很有哈利波特的味道呢！非常有畫面感 很讚👍
2 weeks agoReply
MMM
謝謝 但後面會越來越不哈利波特 第二章開始就會了
2 weeks agoReply
星尋
秘密結社的主謀被處死，就當祕密結社就沒了，聖運還是太年輕了，出過社會都知道結案報告不用看得太認真(純屬吐槽)

第一章我看完了，目前角色個性很鮮明，會期待他們後續的抉擇跟旅途
2 months agoReply
MMM
謝謝你
2 months agoReply
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