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林谷龍
危機來臨時，能讓明乃覺醒體內的聖騎士。
劇情的功力越來越深了，只是有一個不變的公式，就是主配角還都是女生，都是同年級。
沒有跨越老中青少幼的黃金配角出現。
6 months agoReply
夏之楓
我不要油膩大叔
6 months agoReply
林谷龍
@夏之楓,好啦好啦！那油膩大叔推給我啦！我下一章節更新，就推出油膩大叔，這也是我喜愛的角色之一。
6 months agoReply
夏之楓
@林谷龍,肥肥的會摳腳皮那種嗎？
6 months agoReply
林谷龍
@夏之楓,油膩大叔的解釋有很多種，妳還年輕還不懂他的定義是甚麽？

不過給妳的建意是妳將來的作品，會有老中青少幼觀看，所以每個層面妳都要去涉獵。
6 months agoReply
夏之楓
@林谷龍,泰達博士表示難過。
6 months agoReply
林谷龍
@夏之楓,博士好像工具人，他不會難過的
6 months agoReply
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