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嵐斕
@小魚一尾
7 months agoReply
小魚一尾
謝謝意見qwq窩也覺得我是腦袋破洞惹才一次性碰醫學跟法律這兩個超難題材⋯⋯我再試著調整，再次謝謝。我是真的不知道原來檢察官會經常看新聞（我好無知）我是考慮醫學那邊我全部瞎掰，然後直接把我在亂講放在避雷區好了ww
7 months agoReply
嵐斕
其實專業的部分是正確更好，不正確的話，讀者知道作者是非專業的也不會過於強求。所以小魚一尾大大不用太擔心。
（我都寫進評文，是因為評文默認吹毛求疵模式）
比較需要調整的主要是開頭節奏、法庭呈現節奏，跟轉折語氣有時會誤用的部分，還有看新聞一類的細節設定不能太偏離角色應有的技能（除非有特殊原因）。
大大的文很可愛呦！加油！(⁠◍⁠•⁠ᴗ⁠•⁠◍⁠)
7 months agoReply
小魚一尾
@嵐斕,謝謝願意幫我看，沒想到居然間接得到專業醫療人士的意見了（？
7 months agoReply
嵐斕
@小魚一尾,🤣不客氣
恰好我也好奇才會問而已
如果是我沒好奇或感覺奇怪的，也不會在評文中提出來
7 months agoReply
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