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戀嬿紅唇
謝謝小魚~

因為這是我第一次嘗試架空去寫故事，
等我這部寫完後會再重新大修，
關於你說的部分回饋你給得很細，
謝謝你！

另外針對用語的部分我也還在學習跟調整，
因為平常在西方的宮廷文學類的作品我看得比較少，
我會再努力充實自己的，
謝謝你^_^
1 month agoReply
小魚一尾
@戀嬿紅唇
1 month agoReply
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