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筆仔
迫不及待地想知道，兩世界的他們是如何發展感情
1 year agoReply
海貍
因為本來就對彼此有好感了，後續會在各種事件中情感漸漸升溫。因為兩人身分的關係，進展可能會比較慢一點，但絕對是讓人心跳加速啊><
1 year agoReply
鎖夢籠
直接叫教授了🤣🤣
2 years agoReply
海貍
前面好像就有叫過🤣只要沒人聽到都還好！
2 years agoReply
黃曜光
這次切萬克雷爾的視角真香（？
教授稱讚瑟琳那一段真的很香！

趕快救救瑟琳！期待下章

2 years agoReply
海貍
當時考慮了很久，才決定換到克雷爾的視角，因為瑟琳的太受限了。這篇雖然是第三人稱，但一直在使用瑟琳的親密視角來說故事，沒辦法真正做到全知描述。

教授表示：不可以說我認定的人不好！！
2 years agoReply
汘夢
教授小心被哥哥探查到心意哦！！
2 years agoReply
海貍
哥哥若有所覺，但不是很明顯😂
2 years agoReply
西諾尼亞
哎唷～克雷爾在兄長面前讚瑟琳
2 years agoReply
海貍
他其實還滿護短的，但要成為他認定的人很不容易。
2 years agoReply
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