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W.H.
評分：B
10 months agoReply
感謝大大的點評><
10 months agoReply
凝雨
評分：Ｂ

我覺得寫得不錯，心理描寫滿到位，只是「春」和「雪」在文中所佔的比例太接近，令有關「春」的意象打了折扣。
10 months agoReply
謝謝大大的點評！！
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：覺得後面一段的雪比前面的春更加深切，形容具體，雖然後面有拉回來，但感覺春就弱掉了QQ
10 months agoReply
謝謝大大的點評！！
10 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩
評B ，符合春天的主題，也有描寫，但是我覺得主體不夠明題，故評B。
10 months agoReply
謝謝大大的點評><
10 months agoReply
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