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楠都月
突然帶入來仙界的角度了呢。
所以這應該是群像？ 覺得經常轉視角令我有點難跟隨，故事節奏也難跟得上....可能章節之間有點轉接會比較自然？
6 months agoReply
霽客
會盡快改進的感謝。
6 months agoReply
晴空下的雨
所以仙其實是一種修為階級的稱呼？
7 months agoReply
霽客
可以繼續往下看。
7 months agoReply
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