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諾蒂西亞
有關這部作品裏的奴隸兵到底有多強，大概可以參考這個電影：https://youtu.be/4FvODeYNOys?si=MILQl5fx_xqnvVuK

沒錯就是有組織和紀律，而且人均阿基里斯
6 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
同一句句子裏面出現駱駝和銀幣，只是我有潔癖，不想說兩次銀幣
6 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
2-3，頭痛開始的時候腦海中的語言就會變成聽不懂的東西，這個和之後的伏筆有關
6 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
1.1-1.2 的時間是過去式，1.3的時間是現在式，然後2.1是回去過去式，因為之後是接故事序的現在式，其實這個故事時間線是很亂的，不過很線性
6 months agoReply
諾蒂西亞
若果？只是比較古老的中文
6 months agoReply
falabilaba
我剛才查還真的有這個詞，好吃驚。真的太少看到了。
6 months agoReply
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