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大秦書說人
前面還以為父母真的是什麼普通人，沒想到是這種宇宙級別的人物
還引來怪物追殺，不過，是不是因為改變了主角的日常🤔，他們的身份才暴露的？
不再安全，慘了，他以後都要被怪物追殺🤪
1 week agoReply
AnDY
結論是願望不要亂許(X
1 week agoReply
楠都月
劇情鋪排得不錯，會讓人想閱讀下去。
3 weeks agoReply
AnDY
謝謝妳的肯定!!!!
3 weeks agoReply
原子能
影子隨著情緒抖動、擴張，這個設定寫得極具畫面感，可以再試著加深主角的內心衝突。
1 month agoReply
AnDY
謝謝你的建議和訂正!!!!
1 month agoReply
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