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VLiED
還有印象寫這篇散文的時候，正值喜歡亂堆砌字詞把句子拖得很長的年紀（其實也沒有多久以前，人的改變真是迅速）
前半段有夠像考試作文口吻，後半段的主體性思考倒是寫得挺美，撇除中間為賦新辭強說愁的寫景部分的話XD

4 months agoReply
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