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大秦書說人
家人......
看著就是舊的家人刀完一遍，劇情在拿新的家人開刀。
3 months agoReply
霜風化雨
沒那麼狠啦，但一定有刀子
3 months agoReply
黑正
從創挑過來看看了🥳
4 months agoReply
霜風化雨
很刀的～這個故事🤐先幫黑正大大打預防針
4 months agoReply
夜沐
描述得很好耶，每個橋段都很有畫面感，特別是聲音的點綴加強了臨場感，想必創作過程下了很多工夫，甚至可能找了相關畫面的影片來觀摩。

寫作技巧非常高，沒有不通順的地方，也沒看到什麼錯字或是邏輯問題，像是在讀一本已經出版且內容純熟的小說。光這樣一章說不定就花上不下四個小時，包含初稿至潤飾。

劇情方面設定一點一滴在細節交代，該說的，有說，未說的也能在劇情內傳達，沒有外行作家常有的說教感。

看完對整體內容的評價很高呦，期待後面的內容再創高峰🥰
4 months agoReply
霜風化雨
感謝夜沐的評論，的確構築整個故事框架花費了蠻多的心思，我的寫作習慣，是先寫好角色在往後每個事件的心態變化，再開始下筆，這個故事比較黑暗通常會讓自己寫得腦袋嗡嗡的😂
4 months agoReply
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