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星野維
很好奇，大大是先描寫每個人各自的經歷，之後再融入主線故事嗎？
5 months agoReply
kikii
是的！畢竟當初寫的時候我覺得先入主線的話，大家在不知道他們的經歷的前提下只會覺得他們戲精（？）
5 months agoReply
小豬瑩瑩 sponsored 100coins for Issue 2!
這樣的出場，很用心，也很吸引人呀！
5 months agoReply
kikii
再次謝謝打賞！伊馮娜真的很有個人魅力！
5 months agoReply
楠都月
這種對於角色的描述很特別。  也慢慢呈現這幾個人之間的關係。
6 months agoReply
kikii
謝謝！希望你喜歡這種表達方式~
6 months agoReply
朝花夕拾 sponsored 500coins for Issue 2!
7 months agoReply
kikii
非常感謝打賞~
7 months agoReply
朝花夕拾
好寫實喔哎！女孩子的成長過程，好像都不缺這樣的朋友跟經歷，真的有夠虛偽。

還有瑞安說的，有卡爾在，就沒人敢找我們麻煩。

過往經歷中，也是有這樣存在；只是後來，也體認到，凝視深淵，深淵也凝視著你。
7 months agoReply
kikii
個人感覺現在社會存在的女女對立狀況還是不少...
伊馮娜和瑞安也是從過往經歷延伸出來的角色，能有共鳴真的太好了。
7 months agoReply
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