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虛冲
評分：B
10 months agoReply
不勝丸
評分：B
10 months agoReply
存在
評分：B
10 months agoReply
戀嬿紅唇
評分:B

評語:

文字溫暖，但故事性不足，

意象上比較偏散文，加油唷！
10 months agoReply
紫玖島
評分：B
評語：覺得意境很暖，用周圍的人事物看見思念媽媽的情緒，感覺比較偏散文抒情，故事性再加強一點會更好。
10 months agoReply
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