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大秦書說人
終究還是不能由時河阻止露娜嗎
還有紅彥啊，少爺這個詞可不老呢，等著被女僕制裁吧
3 weeks agoReply
星野維
不，必須是時河阻止露娜。
只是時河不能只是抱著拯救去阻止她
3 weeks agoReply
CF LAM
個人意見, 墜落的斷臂的手指恰好碰到終端的啟動鍵, 好像有點牽強, 也不符合你一貫的寫作風格, 如果改成和輝以嘴唇/下巴/甚或右手肘(假設斷的不是右手全臂)啟動, 會否更合適?
1 month agoReply
星野維
我那時想說來一點天外飛來一筆的感覺會更有戲劇感。
我會參考的。
1 month agoReply
CF LAM
@星野維,感謝🙏🏻
只是小弟愚見，希望不要介意
1 month agoReply
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