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déjà vu突然串插的法語，讀者可能出戲，像我就立刻查了一下意思才能再度閱讀下去。建議適度的括號解釋一下。

「是怎生的情形下會見到的？」=>這句感覺有點生硬。
4 months agoReply
JK
沒有注意到呢，等會去補一下解釋，謝謝
4 months agoReply
林谷龍
智賢真是畫中那個少女嗎？
曉鋒邀智賢他們要去尋找甚麽？
5 months agoReply
JK
畫不是我畫的啦🤣
去找主教留下來的線索
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@JK,畫是達文西畫的啦！
主教留下甚麽線索？
5 months agoReply
JK
@林谷龍,在聖經裡找到了地址與名字
5 months agoReply
林谷龍
@JK,哇！妳劇透了。
5 months agoReply
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