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Entrar
難聽的話，我覺得這兩章故事偽善。故意用這兩章去表述貧富懸殊，不論打算拉近富人與窮人的距離，還是去講貧富角色最後都沒有拉近，都偽善。



整個劇情去探討這一情景，故意設定這一劇情看似有意義，實則沒有，是不是一定要有這個看似衝突但並沒有衝突的劇情?



讓富家子弟角色了貧民區，他們訝異、窮人（岑洛）帶富人去貧民區展示這一方法，好像做了事，但甚麼也沒做，只是自我感動。


無論作者是想表達哪方面，我都覺得沒有意義，浪費了。
2 months agoReply
楊郁
不難聽，確實是有為寫而寫的味道。
事實上我沒有打算要去表達甚麼，純粹是一種戲劇衝突。偽善嗎？應該算是。也可以好犬儒地說：現實真是這樣。
2 months agoReply
Entrar
@楊郁,如果沒有想表達，那到底為什麼要寫？
2 months agoReply
楊郁
@Entrar, 就是一個發生了的故事吧
2 months agoReply
Entrar
@楊郁,



終於明白，別人是寫「要買杯麵，在樓下見到一個女孩，BLABLABLABLA」


你是寫「要買杯麵，杯麵沒貨，所以什麼也沒買就回家」

2 months agoReply
楊郁
@Entrar, 確實
2 months agoReply
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