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Miss Anderson

I am sharing this to all my friends

8 years agoReply

Miss Anderson

Well, I finally finished. Wooow, i absolutely love it. I related a lot to the beginning of their love story, where they are walking through the park. It is like you wrote a scene from my own love story with my boyfriend. I really love this and would totally buy it if it were a novel. Please publish it! If you have a sequel, please write it! Although it is totally fine without a sequel. I love how their relationship reflects love for one another, and most importantly, such love for God. Their modesty and integrity are so admirable, a beautiful romance :) i really fell in love with every character and the Indonesian culture you reflect...true talent...bravo, brava

8 years agoReply

Yohana Ekky

First of all, I am very grateful for having you as a reader as well as a friend. You've been a great support to me and gave me more passion to write and publish book. I really hope God allows me to walk in this path of my dream. To become a writer -- at least a leisure one. 😁
If I wrote a sequel, it might be for their marriage life. How they survive in the storms right? Again and again, if God allows, I'll write it after getting married. Hahaha.
The fun fact is that I wrote this before having any love relationship with anyone. So maybe the sequel can be written before getting married? Lol.

Lastly, I thank God I found a friend like you. I'll never miss any chance to read your book too!

8 years agoReply

Miss Anderson

@Yohana Ekky, Ahhh, thank you so much, and I am so happy God has blessed me with a friend like you, as well! And it is my pleasure to encourage you! I know God will bless you with a wonderful love and you will write a magnificent book, whether you decide to write it before or after. I look forward to this one being in print and the one to come!

8 years agoReply

Yohana Ekky

@Miss Anderson, YAY!!! 💕💕💕

8 years agoReply

Nicole Armas

A lovely little story. With some editing on the plot and characters (refer back to my suggestions on previous chapters for this) I believe this story can become even better. As a final note for you, I suggest reading through it and tying up all loose ends as Saberwolf has suggested. This will make the story appear more concise and put together. Anyway, it was a pleasure to read and I hope to see more work from you in the future!

9 years agoReply

Yohana Ekky

I will do it when as soon as I get free time. I can't thank you enough for your help in editing. I really really appreciate it. You are great!

Anyways, I want to read your story too. I have to find out the ending of the story. Ahaha. Can't stop before I finish what I started.

8 years agoReply

Nicole Armas

@Yohana Ekky, It was my pleasure. I am glad to be of help!

8 years agoReply

Saberwolf

Phew ! Quite a nice read tho I would suggest to fill some plot holes. like what made Gee Kay so feared? Or what about the rapist. Dont leave any loose threads . Give such an awesome story some justice. Also was wishing there to be more of "YOUTUBER'S" seeing as how the series is literally named Youtuber High School

9 years agoReply

Yohana Ekky

Thanks a lot!!

Ah!
Yeah, you're right. I missed the fear that Gee Kay had. Gotta work in it soon. And the rapist too.

Youtuber High School? Can you explain me more of it? Are you giving an analogy here or?

9 years agoReply

Saberwolf

@Yohana Ekky, Oh wait nvm the YHS its a different series... i almost confused it with this one XD

9 years agoReply

Yohana Ekky

@Saberwolf, LOL! That's why... 😂😂

9 years agoReply

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