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文木焦
雖然字數超過規則，無法作為參賽品，但我能感受到你是用心寫的，不會讓你刪掉~沒有獻醜這種東西，用心的作品一點都不醜。

讀了很久，應該是一則羽化重生的故事，從棕色轉為潔白，不管是否為月光或錯覺，其意不會有變。老實說你用被窩來比喻蟬的破殼挺有新意的~而且如果是我拿到陪葬用的蟬，也會嚇得想丟掉！
6 days agoReply
白狐
已經努力切了，估唔到都係多咗五百字…
今次真係 just for fun ~

獻醜了~😖🧡🧡
1 week agoReply
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