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黑正 sponsored 1000coins for Issue 13!
補發賞金🥳
垂死掙扎那段，令我選擇了你為第一名~
1 year agoReply
有邑
謝謝黑正大大~期待看到修改後的新版本！
1 year agoReply
黑正
@有邑, 早就修改好了🤣
1 year agoReply
有邑
@黑正,修改好快！新改版融合了大家的建議呢，超棒的~
1 year agoReply
黑正
@有邑, 謝謝🥳 多數是最後一次修改了，完結了就寫新作~
1 year agoReply
黑正
感謝參與啊🥳

新版死前掙扎那段，的確是因為字數過多，刪去了走馬燈。
目前已刪除學弟學妹巧遇校工那橋段，省下來的字數用在補回死前走馬燈了🥳
2 years agoReply
有邑
沒想到真的是因為字數XD
為增加的死前走馬燈歡呼！（主角：蛤？？？
2 years agoReply
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