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孤蒼寰
大大說得很有深度

真的要說的話，我認為上面說的都是靠鋪排，只要你前期鋪排足夠，人物厚度足夠，觀眾/讀者就自然會跟著角色的邏輯走，而不是用日常自身的邏輯處理了。

剩下來就是大大說的轉戾點，把那個邏輯推演、反轉了
2 months agoReply
祿思Luz
真的！！
我本來想說我寫這麼多，會不會廢話很多XD
但想想...先寫再說
寫完 至少我是滿足的 哈哈哈
2 months agoReply
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