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凜羽
每一次修稿都比寫稿時要花腦力，就像音樂家不斷在自己的樂譜寫寫畫畫，譜出最完美的作品，橘柚大大加油！！
1 month agoReply
我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦
咦這樣一想，我寫車文時，也會視角切換……這樣是不是不太好？
1 month agoReply
橘柚
照我朋友所說，如果跳來跳去就很像在是圍觀。

但如果鎖定一個人的視角比較有代入感，而且會隨著角色的視角在故事中。

所以我就把他改成單一人視角～
1 month agoReply
我家的倉鼠會後空翻哦
@橘柚,原來如此！謝謝橘大，我也考慮一下要不要修好了～
1 month agoReply
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