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茶水間日記第四期
ENTRY #1000
Author: 橘柚
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
茶水間日記第四期
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
ENTRY #1000
【04/26 Day26】橘柚日常——修稿
Author: 橘柚
Published:
Apr 26, 2026
1 Min Read
222 Words
No Plagiarism!W6LG2lDjrLJ0enRG1DiOposted on PＥNAＮＡ

2026/04/26（日）

這幾天頭腦還滿清楚的，開始修稿。

原本在第一章車文時，太想把兩個人的感覺都表達出來，造成了視角飄移。

於是藉著修稿，將視角鎖定在阿澤身上，由阿澤去感受，這樣更能強化阿澤的個性，也不會有種，啊不是將軍，隨隨便便被征服了？

修完之後真的還滿滿意的。120Please respect copyright.ＰＥＮＡＮＡF05Z4Q4O8M

也因為一開始長寧的個性太立體，將阿澤的個性蓋過，變成沒有什麼特色，也在修稿時將他加強了一下。

外加一些字句也做了修正跟併章。

實體書來說一章大約會落在５千~７千字，所以併完成正好在這中間。

今天要來修第３～４章。

重開卷一還是覺得啊～寫得不錯耶～

到底是誰寫的！哈哈哈。

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