There’s something very visually engaging about the way you’ve written this. Each scene feels clear and easy to imagine, and the pacing makes it feel almost like it’s already structured for panels. As someone who works in comics, that immediately stood out to me. I’d love to collaborate with you and help adapt this into a manga. You can contact me anytime on Discord: evelyn_miaa.

Chapter 10 took longer to write than I expected. I had to revise it multiple times especially the first scene.

For now this is the version I thought worth posting. I hope you would think that as well.

Also, the next chapter would start with another character perspective...

Who do you think it would be?

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Thank you so much for reading, I never thought I would ever write a story to begin with, and being able to finish 10 chapters felt really unbelievable to me...

This is the first time I've ever attempted writing, and the first story I typed along my keyboard...

Again, thanks for reading, and I hope for you to have a wonderful day...

- cjohngt