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窩在角落看書的貓
從第一章一路看到現在，我一直很喜歡你的作品對情緒的描寫，每一次焦慮、恐慌、內心拉扯，都讓人很有畫面, 寫得很深刻。
老實說，第六章開始穿插 夏 的回憶時，我一度有點疑惑，甚至覺得故事節奏好像突然換了方向，一直猜想作者到底想說什麼。
直到今天看到第十章，我才有一種「原來前面的安排都是必要的」的感覺。
我很喜歡這個轉折。
不是刻意製造反轉，而是讓讀者在某一章突然理解，原來故事一直都朝著這個方向前進。很期待接下來的發展~~
5 days agoReply
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