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沐紫藜 sponsored 200coins for Issue 10!
6 days agoReply
沐紫藜
這篇的氣味和場景描寫很有畫面，從廁所的霉味、鐵鏽味，到天花板上的聲響與紅線，都讓人讀起來有一種很不舒服的壓迫感。

你寫得不是單純寫怪談，而是寫「明明不只一個人看見了，卻選擇遺忘或是覆蓋記憶」的集體沉默，這點很貼本次主題。

謝謝大大來參加這次的創挑，祝您寫作愉快～
1 month agoReply
申寧
謝謝大大！很高興這篇故事的氛圍有成功傳達出來，你的回覆讓我有種被理解的感動♡很感謝你舉辦這次的創挑機會，也祝你寫作靈感源源不絕，創作超級愉快！
1 month agoReply
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