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【緩緩轉頭頭去】->多字「緩緩轉過頭去」。

主角被尋仇這段寫得很有張力。「你害死師尊，大師兄，今日便是你的死期。」這句話一出來，前面主角為了給女主報仇而告密的行為，其代價和後果就立刻顯現了，因果報應，劇情一下子就深刻起來。
9 months agoReply
柏舟
Thank you
9 months agoReply
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