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Dlofc84
Latest revisions and it is getting closer to being finished
Cynderz
I really love the opening sentence and i think this a great way to open the book. I enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to the main body of the story
Dlofc84
Thank you on it. I recently did I complete rewrite on the Prologue on a suggestion. It was wrote in a much more complex style and though people liked it, they thought it was a bit archaic and long winded. I pared it down and modernized to wording. Since I have got a few compliments on its improvements.
Dlofc84
This is an rewrote version of the Prologue. It is one thousand words less and wrote in a less compex manner. Please read it and let me know what you think of it.
Dlofc84
please excuse any spelling or grammar, as stated I lost the final copy when my previous computer died. This copy was sent by email to my wife. She sent it back to me, hence the page numbers and such. I am working to remove them slowly but I am a father of four so my time to do such is very strained at best. My hopes is you enjoy it and keep checking back, I will work on it and I will be posting the next book in the series, Seed of Destruction.
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