I really love the opening sentence and i think this a great way to open the book. I enjoyed this chapter and looking forward to the main body of the story
Thank you on it. I recently did I complete rewrite on the Prologue on a suggestion. It was wrote in a much more complex style and though people liked it, they thought it was a bit archaic and long winded. I pared it down and modernized to wording. Since I have got a few compliments on its improvements.