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一個平凡的住院醫師
序章的電影感直接拉滿，作者的蒙太奇處理經由詩歌的詠頌進行切割，也讓人帶入女主角手術實驗到一半就進入家變與逃亡，記憶與一是支離破碎的情境之中。

創傷後的病患長期止痛一直都是醫學上難解的課題，而本作品在這個悲劇下開頭下，留下了名為 Project Painkiller 的伏筆，期待後續的展開。
3 months agoReply
雨時
Thanks doc！因爲大體上算是軟科幻作品，一些設定特別是涉及醫學部分存在諸多不嚴謹，敬請多多包涵~

還是十分感謝您的閲讀與關注，這個故事仍在努力打磨當中！
2 months agoReply
大秦書說人
機械的靈魂於血泊初蹄有一種.....中二的感覺啊


3 months agoReply
雨時
謝謝您的留言！

序章嘗試了蒙太奇處理，本意是想在逃亡+數小時前的事故經過之間跳躍講述。

每次切換場景時加入一段詠頌——若干年後有那種吟游詩人在講述當年的流言傳説，哈哈，所以遣詞造句會誇大、中二一些

3 months agoReply
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