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林德辉 sponsored 200coins for Issue 1!
写得太棒了。。。

如同剧本，画面感和节奏感都被作者拿捏到很好。

没有一丝空余的细节，却有让人喘气低潮，惹人深思的环节。

剧情反转也有让人想不到的新奇！
好看 👍
8 months agoReply
林墨
謝謝你喜歡我的作品，如果有餘力，會推出更多短篇的。
8 months agoReply
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