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The Virtual Shadow
This looks good, and could continue as a novel, it to me feels a bit fast written but that's my only complaint.

Also if you want to use ERZA and not be confused by it make it slightly easier by using E.R.Z.A., it should be seen more as something that is shortened.
9 years agoReply
Phantasyfan42
thank you, and admittedly, yes it was written fast, 2 days, if that is fast. I will edit the acronym, thanks for pointing it out. :)
9 years agoReply
The Virtual Shadow
@Phantasyfan42, Hope that helps. I once written a song in 3 minutes, so yeah i understand fast writing.
9 years agoReply
Phantasyfan42
@lightofshadows, great! it helped alot, thanks. :D
9 years agoReply
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