This looks good, and could continue as a novel, it to me feels a bit fast written but that's my only complaint.
Also if you want to use ERZA and not be confused by it make it slightly easier by using E.R.Z.A., it should be seen more as something that is shortened.
Also if you want to use ERZA and not be confused by it make it slightly easier by using E.R.Z.A., it should be seen more as something that is shortened.