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Happy喵
寫得很好啊～（原來是修訂版）
2 years agoReply
貓枯
不要啊啊啊啊啊啊啊，你為什麼看到了！！！( ･-･̥ )我還沒改好啊啊啊啊啊啊
2 years agoReply
Happy喵
@蝶半醒,因為你有Link~放在末日那裡了XDD
2 years agoReply
貓枯
@Happy喵,答應我，忘掉它好嗎，等我考完試我立馬改！！ᵒᵐᵍᵎᵎᵎ٩(⌯꒦ິ̆ᵔ꒦ິ)۶
2 years agoReply
Happy喵
@蝶半醒,不是修訂了嗎？我覺得已經寫得好好了👍
2 years agoReply
Happy喵
才剛開學啊==
2 years agoReply
貓枯
@Happy喵,我想改到以後看的時候無從下手的那種ヽ(；▽；)ノ
2 years agoReply
Happy喵
@蝶半醒,😱😱😱
2 years agoReply
數學可以吃嗎？
你加油我之後再慢慢看XD
2 years agoReply
晴空下的雨
看起來似乎是個有趣的故事。

吳緣的動作和心理描述很不錯，很有感覺，就好像看到一個活生生的吳緣站在面前。
2 years agoReply
貓枯
不知道要怎麼解釋欸，不過她的確是一個活生生的人
2 years agoReply
晴空下的雨
@蝶半醒,應該說，我覺得你的人物描寫十分成功，讓人很有感覺。
2 years agoReply
大鼠
感覺有股說不出的心酸
2 years agoReply
貓枯
不用酸，後面會很嗨( ͡°Ĺ̯ ͡° )
2 years agoReply
眞室邇
❤️❤️❤️很多❤️
狗狗寫得很投入感情
2 years agoReply
貓枯
你給我比較多愛心，我比愛樓上那位再更愛你一點點
2 years agoReply
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