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水無月 楓
怎會見怪！感恩都來不及了！果然還是有多人的感覺🧐還以為將他們GP成一家人會比較好記，似乎是想得太美XD個性不夠鮮明這個我也在努力中，感謝花時間閱讀及指出🥰🥰

流暢那個要歸功虛沖先生的指正🧑‍🦯

單從這些看來，本作真的是過於平凡了！儘管怎描繪還是帶不出讓人重現我腦海中的畫面的感覺.....

再次感恩妳的回饋😁
4 years agoReply
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