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讀者六號
聚精會神地注視著它反射「性」油燈火光的黑亮鱗甲→那個「性」好像是多打的？

傭兵團講話比較接近我們現代人的口吻，好有親切感喔
1 month agoReply
森琅

謝謝提醒，多了贅字沒錯
應該是魔族的口氣比較文言一點😆
1 month agoReply
夏季雨
我有看過前傳~突然看到認識的角色好驚喜，這肯定是友方吧😆
1 month agoReply
森琅
哇哇😆那應該會有很熟悉的感覺
他們是本傳很關鍵一條角色線，會延續到很後面
1 month agoReply
路波（Loop）
灰蒙帥帥 就愛這種酷酷感覺（？
鰻魚形容好好笑👍
2 years agoReply
森琅
謝謝路波！！從這章就開始進入彼岸篇的故事了🙈

2 years agoReply
夜臨 Yalin Hayami
戰鬥描述得俐落又具有節奏，我很喜歡末段的演出。
2 years agoReply
森琅
謝謝您🙏🙏一下子就被團長給打昏了😫
2 years agoReply
貓仙翁
黑龍就這麼死了QQ
3 years agoReply
森琅
媽媽🥲
3 years agoReply
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