Your welcome :)

@Black Lotus

@Black Lotus Hey, thanks for the revision suggestion. I am still strugling on finding my own grammar mistake

Nice opening, I'd say. I noticed some minor grammar mistakes (but then again, don't we all do them?) but it's not too apparent where it's unbearable to read so you're fine. 

Also, the scenes where you described about students and the disciplinary stuff kinda reminded me back in high school where things like that certainly happened. It's almost eerily similar haha but it's also good because it's pretty relatable. I also like those last sentences because it seemed like the focal point of the story where you brought the readers to the main point of the beginning of your piece. I thought that was good. 

Yw! If you want me to delete these to keep your book tidy,  let me know.