If anyone be willing, I have some need for critiques of 13. I made a post about it in the Beta-ing society and I go more in depth on there, but I'm looking for plot-holes, plot-inconsistencies, inexplicable jumps, flow disruptions, opinions on characters, the writing style, the organization of it. I'm also looking for general opinions on it and anything else that anybody wants to add. The summary of the story is cringy I know, but I suck at writing summaries lol. It's essentially a paranormal romance with some greek mythology as well. So if you have the time, I would really appreciate it if you gave it a try.
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