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has edited Issue 34 - ❧ Chapter 31: Tower of Focus ❧ of Soul Tear - Book One: The Last Spirit Adept

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has edited Issue 34 - ❧ Chapter 31: Tower of Focus ❧ of Soul Tear - Book One: The Last Spirit Adept

6 years ago

has edited Issue 34 - ❧ Chapter 31: Tower of Focus ❧ of Soul Tear - Book One: The Last Spirit Adept

6 years ago

has published Issue 34 - ❧ Chapter 31: Tower of Focus ❧ of Soul Tear - Book One: The Last Spirit Adept

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And this is why I'm taking so long. See if you can spot the mistakes in this little paragraph:

The woman's breath is hot now behind her. Rouge trails her long nails across the back of Merryn neck.

I've got 3k words if this to fix. The tenses, misplaced comnas, over description, (left hand/right hand.) Ugg!

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Am slowly untangling the tower chapter. It's hard to write lately I just want to sit outside, walk around and soak up this sun. xD

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New chapter for Soul Tear coming soon. I can't believe two weeks got away from me like that. 😲 I'll just have to catch up and post two chapters.

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has published Issue 8 - Passave Voice Sc*ew Ups. of Dark's Writing Tips

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