Hey all! I just put up the seventh chapter of Hiraeth and I am interested in receiving feedback for it as I definitely struggled with it. I am looking for how well it flows with the rest of Hiraeth, the feelings you get when reading, whether you feel a disconnect when reading it, anything you wish was elaborated on, or anything like that. Any feedback is welcome, but I REALLY NEED some feedback for the seventh chapter/issue.
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