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墨
11 hours ago 0
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成鏡蹤
哪方面的建議？
10 hours agoReply
墨
像是起承轉合、人物、情節、場景，或是文筆方面
10 hours agoReply
成鏡蹤
@墨,你打算寫多少字？
現有兩篇看起來文筆不錯，承轉、人物、情節、場景那些，篇幅不夠，無法評論。
我把自己寫的小說，丟給AI寫導讀，AI給我很多意見，你也可以試看看。
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