If your chapter made you cry but you’re scared readers won’t feel it…
If your chapter made you cry but you’re scared readers won’t feel it…That’s the stage I work best in.I pay attention to the quiet thingsThe one line of dialogue that feels slightly out of characterThe scene that should hit hard but lands softlyThe paragraph readers might skim without realizing whyI don’t just say this is good.I’ll tell you why it works.And when it doesn’t, I’ll tell you exactly where the emotion drops or the pacing slips.If you’re between drafts and overthinking every decision, send it my way. Fresh eyes. Honest feedback. No ego.
and then Add to home screen.