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David Mark ▶ Lenore Corvinae

Hello Lenore! Can you talk for a while?

7 months ago Like! 0

Lenore Corvinae

That depends on what you want to talk about.

7 months agoReply

David Mark

Sure! I’ll be happy to talk with you regarding your story. Could you please let me know which aspects you’d like to focus on?

7 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

@David Mark, sure, it might take me a minute to think about it and I've gtg somewhere in about 10 minutes, though.

Forgive me for being cautious a bit ago, I keep getting people who are asling me to pay them for essentially drawing fan art...

7 months agoReply

David Mark

@Lenore Corvinae,No worries at all, I completely understand. Take your time to think about it, and we can discuss whenever you’re ready. I’m happy to help with your story. If possible, you can follow me so that we can chat in DMs more easily and in detail.

7 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

Right now, I'm trying to figure out how to make Abyssal more of a participant in his own story. As of now, he doesn't do much, but he's still essential due to his power.

I just don't know what I can have him doing in the meantime. I don't just want things to happen TO him, you know? I want more to happen because of him.

Besides that, I'm trying to get feedback from people to know if my power system and backstories make sense without the huge blocks of text I have Achlys provide on occasion.

The second draft is going to have more scenes going back to those points in time.

7 months agoReply

David Mark

@Lenore Corvinae I completely understand what you mean. Making Abyssal more of an active participant sounds like a great idea it will definitely make the story more engaging. If you want, I can brainstorm some ideas for what he could do in the meantime. Also, getting feedback on your power system and backstories is a smart move; it’ll help make everything clearer and more cohesive. I’m excited to see how the second draft connects the earlier points in time!

7 months agoReply

David Mark

@Lenore Corvinae Do you have any other social media accounts, like Instagram or Discord, where we can talk in more detail?

7 months agoReply

Lenore Corvinae

@David Mark, sure. My discord is @kiraklaw, https://discord.gg/vVNRHC5K

7 months agoReply

David Mark

@Lenore Corvinae, thanks for sharing I'll talk to you there okay

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Lenore Corvinae

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